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Violence with teens Many people believe that being a teacher is dangerous becuase of how the youth od today acts out violently. There are a lot of people in the world that precieve the teenagers as a threat to many people in the world. They describe the teens that have shot schools up; it is said that teenagers are the biggest threat to this society. They need to crack down on the teens that are acting out violenty, many of them are interested in sex and drugs. The schools need to put their foot down and put a zero tolerance policy in place so that the children will not have time to act out, they have tried it before but they are not enforcing the rules enough. A lot of violence takes place because parents and teachers today well some of them dont pay attention to what the children are doing and they just let the kids get away with everything and that is not the way to go about doing things. The bloggers can improve this by adding more details to the story and do more explaining about why the teachers feel threatened.

Reaching out to the YOUTH There are so many incidents that take place within the school systems fights, schootings, bullying, and also drug abuse. There are also a lot of ways that an adult or anyone can reach out to a teen, its starts with the parents then the schools. Children who act out can be placed in a behavior modification school, a rehabilitation center, or setting up different programs that the children would enjoy, to take their minds of off all the negativity. Some of the children are so tough that they might need to be put in a military school, or even get sent to bootcamp. Doing these things can change a person because they will see how it feels to having to listen to someone tell them what to do and when to do it, and if they don’t abide by the rules they will have no choice but to suffer the consequences. Tell more about the intervention programs that can take place.

A synthesis papers differs from an objective summary and a rhetorical analysis paper because you are able to give a little insight of your opinion and you can not do that in an objective summary.It is different from a rhetorical analysis because you are analyzing a text and with a synthesis you are making connections, which is also the purpose of the paper. It makes it hard to write the paper because you may thinking totally different from what the author is actually trying to say. The easy part about the essay was when you finally got the concept down packed you could just flow through the paper and put the input of the author and your opinion. The examples that you see in everyday life because you can combine two or more things that you can draw conclusions from about what someone’s viewpoints are.

What i learned when doing the rhetorical analysis essay is that is differs from a objective summary because you are comparing more than one author when you are writing your essay. In rhetorical analysis we examine how authors attempt to persuade their audiences by looking at the various components that make up the art of persuasion. what was difficult about the paper to me is when i had to compare the authors and i sometimes thought they had similar view points and they didn’t. what was easy about the essay is when i had to find different ways to see how the authors viewpoints went along with the subject and if was something that i believed it would be fun for me. the rhetorical analysis that can hep you in life is that you can be able to compare the things that people do in everyday life and compare them to your own viewpoints.

What I learned about the objective summary is that I am skilled in many different ways when writing papers. I believed that the only challenge for me is when i was not able to give my opinion about what the author had to say about the things that he or she wrote about in their essay. What i found that was easy is when i was able to interpret the things that the author wrote about and i was able to talk about the article from the authors viewpoint.

peer critique

The feedback that i recieved for my class mates about my paper was very useful. they were telling me the things that were wrong and right in my rough draft but they were saying the things in a nice manner. the things that i think can be improved is if everyone comes with a draft, and everyone actually reading papers throughly and giving feedback…….

This is a Video of the Julian Jaguars at their homecoming came this is my old high school. people should talk about things lik this because they will know a little bit about what a support factor is.  This is something that people plan for a certain amount of time and they help eacb other and they also give feed back. It is important for people to be able to support one another, and come together as a group. Some people many not know what it is to have support but people can learn…

HELLO EVERYONE

My name is Sable C and I am currently a sophomore at Northern Illinois University. I am a very independent individual, I love to do hair and dance. My major is Child Development and I love to work with children. After I Finish at N.I.U I am going to school to get my hair license…. And I am an AQUARIUS!!!!! LOVE,LIVE,LAUGH